mein kaatil nahi mujhe sazaa na do
uski yeh berukhi mujhe khuda na do
kashtiya gum gastah hai berehm samandar mein
naadaan yeh bhi hai, inhe toofan na do
janaazah roz dekhu mere marhoom dil ka
zindah hu phir bhi aisi zindagi na do
askh behte rahe saari raat bhar
uski yeh berukhi mujhe khuda na do
18 Jan 2007
Shalin Jain
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January 26th, 2007 at 8:16 pm
main to aapki fan ho gayi!
February 14th, 2007 at 6:36 am
ur poetry is awesome.. better still is ur photography!!!tooo good
June 13th, 2007 at 6:41 pm
It is sometimes very hard to say anything for a work especially for me.
But this poem has moved me quite in my heart somehow it feels that u can relate to what is being tried to show by these lines and thats what makes it great.
Two Lines by me (definitely in no standing as yrs)
Kabhi Dost kahte ho kabhi bad due dete ho
jaise bhi yaad karte ho, zindagi meri badha dete ho
Thanks
Mudit (mudittewari@hotmail.com)
June 30th, 2007 at 10:31 pm
Liked the poetry, its touching ……, wish, you never have to say in your real life…….
Let us see a positive poetry, i would love to have it on your site.